Opinions and thoughts on whether I should keep putting fingers to keys?

I like it =) the name Andrea however, does not appeal to me in this situation. I associate Andrea with a feminine, classic, very polite girl, but I do like that you gave her the name Andie to pass it off. You need to do a little editing first off, a few misplaced words, a few forgotten ones, and a couple of needed commas. When reading this you tend to tell rather than show, I'm sure you know what that means. You explain everyone in detail about how they look rather than allowing little bits of them to shine through. Other than that, I like it, a little dark for my taste and vampires are overdone but you're going somewhere. Keep those fingers on the keyboard.